holdon1015

Effective use of very few words. The tone and message are clear and interesting. You really get the feeling behind it. I agree that a bit of background might be ...

Wow, this is fantastic, Jaz! I like that you keep the situation between the two in suspense but still use some foreshadowing. Your details are tight! Normally, when I read ...

Thanks so much, Iain! =]

Hey everyone! I've never posted one of these before so I hope this works. =] Jaz totally got the interpretation down! =] It's about how churches should be utilizing the ...

There is a building, tucked back, down the street. Inside, not a soul stirs. The building has a lobby, with clean white floors, and decorative plants. The welcome mat greets ...