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Re: What to write?
straight up, homie G! trippin poem. its funny to. quik tip, review 2 writings quik, or else you'll have to write four and we know how much fun that is ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: The City that Forever Sleeps
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Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: The Letter
First of, BillyBoy,I have no idea where this guy is. is he in school? is he at home? That type of establishment is important so the reader can connect with ...
Jun 26, 2008 -
Re: chapter 1 (maybe)
just a few things dude. first use a few more discriptions in your writing. "as a bullet struck a tree in front of him" is kinda, blah (exciting, but blah). ...
Jun 26, 2008
