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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Chasing Cars

    Well first of all I love the song, and I think you did it justice with this piece. At first I wasn't sure it fit with what I imagined the ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Well, today was..

    Aww, it's adorable! I like how the character seems so real, and how by the time the phone rings I feel like I've known her for a few chapters, when ...

    Sep 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Why am I?

    This is very well written. I can tell it's planned out, with the rhyming and the comparisons in it. It's also a very real and relateable piece. My life isn't ...

    Sep 3, 2011


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