hoagie28

Well first of all I love the song, and I think you did it justice with this piece. At first I wasn't sure it fit with what I imagined the ...

Three days earlier… I pleaded him with my eyes, folding my hands under my chin, a silly grin on my face. He had to take it. Like bait on a ...

Aww, it's adorable! I like how the character seems so real, and how by the time the phone rings I feel like I've known her for a few chapters, when ...

This is very well written. I can tell it's planned out, with the rhyming and the comparisons in it. It's also a very real and relateable piece. My life isn't ...

I think it's a great piece of writing. As a non-twin, it really helps to kind of understand and relate what life would be like as a twin. It's also ...

I sighed, my limbs giving in to the ridiculously strong duct tape. It’s no use. He wasn’t going to do anything to me anyway. If he was, he would have ...

I like where it's going. It keeps me curious, I like how you didn't give away too much information just yet. Keep writing! I'm interested :)