hitxuanni

Hello there!! Chanced upon this on the shorts page and I must say, the premise is pretty interesting. Personally, though, I liked the first quarter and the last paragraph or ...

Hello! I read the first chapter of this story a few days ago, and I thought it was pretty great writing, but for me there wasn't especially any hook yet ...

I like it! This is not exactly the most original story out there, but it certainly is entertaining. You have a kind of dry, somewhat satirical sense of humor going ...

HELLO MALAYSIAN! Or, I assume, Malaysian, maybe Vietnamese, I don't know. I was born in Malaysia myself, although I was brought to Singapore at a young age. But it still ...

I thought this story was cool, then I thought it was mildly stupid, then retrospectively, I now find it a great story in general, and unexpectedly thought provoking. So I ...

There is something very, very HP Lovecraftian about this. In fact, you're probably secretly his daughter or granddaughter or something. I even misread the story's title as Cthulhu somehow, and ...

Altogether now! Awwwwwwww...... That was absolutely adorable. In my country, we sometimes use 'blur' to describe a person. Not sure if it's used that way anywhere else, but here, saying ...

This is probably going to sound stupid but... You're not really fifteen are you??? Stop tricking gullible people online (like me) into feeling inferior D: After reading a few of ...

Interesting premise and great execution, but what made this story for me was the style. I'm not sure if you meant it to be that way, but the first person, ...

I wasn't very sure if I wanted to laugh or to cry, and that made me really vexed and I hence feel like hitting you. But I say that with ...

I was led to your portfolio from your other story "Close your eyes", and I was disappointed to see that you only had one other story. And after reading this ...

I'm new here (literally just signed up about half an hour ago), and this was the first story I chanced upon. After reading this, I feel like I really need ...