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Okay we need to try a better song Oh watching the people get lairy.... It's not very pretty I tell thee

I have a few comments, hope that they help. You really gripped me emotionally, really got into the head of the characters well and made me feel what they were ...

This is awesome i love the way you ended it right there i'd be searching everywhere to find out what happened. :D the only thing i would change would be ...

i really didnt understand that

Run, run for your life Run, don’t stop to scream No time for fear, no time to be scared There's just now, and you need to run He's right behind ...

Dear Diary, I’m just so hungry I had nothing to eat today A drop of water for breakfast Then I began to work away Dear Diary, mummy is sick Daddy ...

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well-lighted What's your favourite colour, black or white?

Don't worry about reading the whole thing if you can't be bothered :D Then “This is so perfect,” Kesi smiled blissfully, holding her newborn child in her arms, She gazed ...

How can I improve this? Amala sat in the large, almost royal looking library, watching her Grandfather organise his books. He was always with his books nowadays. He didn’t really ...

this is really good work, it is very realistic, and i like realistic; i think the shading is fine, but it would look a litle bit nicer if u did ...

I need all constructive comments and criticism you can give me about this please Black Rain Then “This is so perfect,” Kesi smiled, holding her newborn child in her arms, ...

Ditto Griffin. I really like the composition, especially the contrast of her face and hair. Her nose looks really well shaped as well. Is this in charcol? no its pencil

Sorry, my updated version My name is Amy, It’s my birthday today I lie here unmoving No one cares anyway My face is beaten So bruised and black I lie ...