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Winter had arrived in Gozo. Instead of the vibrant splashes of colour that dotted Victoria in summer, soft grey clouds floated overhead, as though giants had thrown a silk veil ...

First of all, well done - I was starting to wonder whether any questions that had remained unanswered in the first two chapters would be cleared up, and I got ...

Hey it's Highwordman here, Overall quite an interesting piece - nowhere near conventional writing, but still familiar enough to make the reader feel comfortable, while intrigued and interested. The pi

Thanks for your review Noelle - that was very helpful :)

An entertainingly funny and rather random poem. The original and quirky title grabbed my attention immediately. My only question is how the wet fish ties in with the rest of ...

A very interesting piece, with an intriguing premise. Some minor grammatical errors here and there did detract from the flow of it, but otherwise, great work. My only criticism is ...

En extremely eloquent poem with sets of images which, although patriotic, aren't overpowering. Very well done - you effortlessly pulled off what would have been quite a tricky piece

The engines of the Gozo ferry hummed continuously as they drove the propellers under my feet, churning the midnight blue Mediterranean waters into foam. I had spent quite some time ...

Thanks for your valid points, twit - you're right, it does need some more plausibility to it. However, I must say that as indicated in the final sentence, the rest ...

Thanks for the review smylin, i'm pleased to see that it works as a piece of writing :)

hey palip :) a very intense read, crackling with tension and extremely vivid, lucid and immersing. Although it could have been clearer at times I suppose it will all be ...

As soon as I had finished reading English at Cambridge, I knew I wanted to do something different. I yearned for travel, for new experiences, for the sun, for adventure, ...

an intriguing piece, with stellar atmosphere at the beginning (pun intended), capturing everything vividly and making the story seem as important as the descriptions- a rare feat. I would encourage ...

very original and a good example of beauty in simplicity. I would have liked to see some more length to it, but other than that it's great :

I would have liked to see a bit more length- you could have introduced other topics and some humour to give it more definition. Otherwise, the rhythm and rhyme are ...