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Lighting, brightens the sky. Opening the gates of wild wilderness. Places no one dares to journey. Places only you can dream of. Dark vengeful people live there, taking all they ...

I love how you go so deeply into your poems. You send a clear message to be about it. I really like the darkness of the poems :3. I try ...

this is a very good start. I like it alot =) if you could find somethings to add on to it, I think that you could go really far. I ...

The big black wet nose huge bright green eyes. Light brown ears with the spot between. So warm and fluffy snuggling up to my neck. Loving to be held. Falling ...

I look at you, I long for you. For us to be together, For me to be wrapped up, In your securing arms. For your love, To fill my heart. ...

I like your story and details but i need to know if ur going into a book with it or what? the ending just doesn't go with the story... it ...

I looked up at him wondering what he was doing playing with my hair but just smiled and waved. Me and Chris have been friends for a long time so ...

i like the poem. Its quick and easily can be read and understood. Good job! keep it up!!

the cold crisp air around us as we snuggle under a blanket, we keep close holding each other tightly, trying to keep our hearts beating as one. I look at ...

I think this is a good poem. But the only thing that i really see that bothers me is the rhythm. You are off. I tried reading this out loud ...

i like your poem and have a few friends that can relate to it. I have been put into the guys perspective in this poem. I have told people to ...