hi-mi-tsu

Interesting free verse. For all that there was no real conformity to the lines, it still flowed fairly well. It feels a little unfinished, though...was there going to be more ...

I agree that the theme of the poem was overdone and rather...hokey, almost, in some places. It was a little rough, but the rhyme scheme was good and it seemed ...

Hey there. I'm hi-mi-tsu, but you can call me himi or hi-chan or even my real name (sarah)...though I'd prefer my real name wasn't used. I'm 17 and write a ...