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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roping Dolls

    i have just a few complaints (all spelling errors aside): 1. She had lost her best friend, next-door-neighbor and study-buddy in one clean sweet. Ut was hard to walk by ...

    Mar 10, 2006
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: before they met

    i wanted to do give you a detailed crit, so here i go: She was aware of him. Since before she could remember she had known him, and now he ...

    Mar 8, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The B Train

    There were some interesting parts in this. Particularly: It was as though the subway brought out the best in each and every one of these women, but no matter what ...

    Mar 7, 2006


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead