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Hey! Now this, this poem is really deep. Most people (including myself) write a lot of things that don't really challenge a serious subject. This could arise a lot of ...

I really liked this. I have to disagree and say that I loved the last line. Though this part may be my favorite: No one told me how much I ...

Hey! I completely loved this poem and all of it's dramaticness? (pretend that's a word) The ending really caught me off guard, and I totally loved it. I'm not really ...

I absolutely loved this. I've written a lot of (sucky) poems on leaving, but someone being pulled back in. I never really new how to execute it properly without sounding ...

Hey Snoink! Thanks for the review on my last poem. As you know could probably tell, I don't know much about poetry (just an aspiring writer.) So, here is what ...

Be brutal, this one is a little sketchy. The electric purple In his argyle veins Are like the blood He feeds me His snow touched skin, And November breathe Freeze ...

Thank you so much, you both really helped. I understand completely, and now realize that I have to spell check even more before I enter, haha. Thanks again.

You leave yourself to the chocolate dawn, filled with a volcano, that erupts at black bird's twilight. The lava marks the night, bleeds its vanilla icicles stained of red that ...

This is the kind of poetry I like. Not real rhymy, (if that's a word) but hardcore. I loved the how it was told in Adolf's eyes. I could really ...

I'm going to keep this short and to the point like your poem (which I loved by the way :) I completely love this. Totally describes this guy I fell ...