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I thought this was really cute, very relatable. It was short, and with more work I think it could have a more powerful effect and be brilliant! Other than that ...

Today my friend informed me that French women spend 38% of the day naked. Apparently it's fact, but I find that doubtful. ps. I did not mean to offend any ...

Hey! I love the simplicity, and found it very relatable. I wish it rhymed here and there, or maybe an alliteration or two. Other than that I enjoyed it. Love ...

"Emily" he said. Though he was talking to me. "Emily" he said. Through faded eyes that could not see behind the invisibility. "Emily" he said to me, and I just ...

Hey! I absolutely loved this. I can always tell when I really like lyrics is when I wish I could hear the music played with them! Love and all that ...

This is simply brilliant. I was nearly moved to tears when I read it. It's people like you who change the world one step at a time. I thank you ...

Hey! I really liked this. It kind of had a "Dear John" feel to it, and maybe that is just because I'm in the middle of reading that book ha ...

I have no intentions of portraying a Julius Caesar essence here, but there is a forum dedicated to lyrics. I would put this there, because it is simply brilliant. I ...

I'd like to say in advance that I thank Bloc Party (the song "Signs" in particular) for giving me inspiration. . enjoy :) Your tongue, is a like a new ...

Hey! Thanks to everyone! This is my first song so I was a little worried about the feedback, but you all have been very helpful. :) Black Wind: Thank you ...

Hey! 1st off welcome to YWS. 2nd, I absolutely loved this! It was short and sweet. The little bird concept was very relatable, which is always great in poetry. I ...

It Loves You There's a morning glory in my pocket that shines a brilliant purple. It wants you more and more. It loves you. There's a smile encased in my ...

Enormity How I'm drawn to you. How I used to love you, yet you never loved me. Am I mean? Do you find my idiosyncrasies ugly? Is my complexion only ...

Hey! Welcome to YSW. Nit-picks. I don't feel that every line has to be capitalized and/or end with a period. Some lines can just end with a comma or the ...

Story of my life.. Characters become your very best friend – and they’re not even alive! When you counter and literally argue that said characters are indeed alive. Just because ...