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Thanks for the reviews. It's all thanks to my mom that I didn't get in trouble that day. Vox Nihili, when my dad called my mom to tell her about ...

'Ello, CK, Thanks for the critic. I like this story better than the other one too. I'm thinking of deleting Dead But Not Gone. What do you think? I'll edit ...

No, Ella, I have not edited it yet. I am right now.

Thanks for the critic everyone. I'll edit it. Read again and tell me if I need anything else. Thanks

I see what you mean about adding suspense at the end, but I'm going to wait for others to comment on my story before I edit it. Thanks for the ...

While I was reading this, I could see everything in my head; you described it so well. However, I gotta agree with eaglefire91 and ask if the f-word is really ...