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Re: The Plot Game
The girl lost her planner due to her careless nature, a nature that would later land her in trouble with Greenpeace.
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Statistically speaking, someone dies every three seconds. Will the next one be you? Are you alone in your house? Are you SURE? With that in mind, let us begin our ...
Aug 16, 2010 -
Re: Make Up Poor Names For Characters
Cocoa Power. (It was meant to be Cocoa Powder, but then I mis-typed it. I like the result, though.)
Jul 13, 2010 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
His fingers dug into her eye sockets like an eager kindergardener into a bowl of pudding. ((Don't ask.))
Jul 3, 2010 -
Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title
Herbert Lansing is a massive egotist/actor who has just written his memoirs; he believes that the world will fall to his feet and pucker up on reading it. However, on ...
Jun 27, 2010 -
Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title
"Bulletproof Cupid": Amy Perall has recently gotten a gun. This is not to protect herself from crime, although there is that; Amy is an advanced form of Cupid, a girl ...
Jun 26, 2010 -
Re: Give a Summary, Make a Title
Sam Bolton entered the family summer home's attic when he was eight years old with the intention of finding something to while away the hours. Instead, he discovers an album, ...
Jun 25, 2010 -
Re: Make Up F.R.E.D.'s Backstory
Although I could never come up with something as good as GryphonFledgling's, I shall give it a go. F.R.E.D was created by a young, enthusiastic programmer called Bot Lover, in ...
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
Hm, I'd say about 7/10. I'd like to see more of what's going on, whether this is something that is not human speaking, or whether it's psychological. If it's not ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: TTFN and TTYL by Lauren Myracle
Well, I'd have to say that it sounds creative, you know, different, but its also the plot that counts. Reading it on Wikipedia, I'd have to say that there is ...
Feb 19, 2010 -
Re: A Story Idea. Some feedback would be great.
I think that 2 and 4 are good. 1 is too... yeah, happy ever after. 3 is good, very profound, but you have to admit, it's really bleak. So yeah, ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Is the short story dead?
Unfortunately, I could be about to make the problem worse but part of my job is in keeping with the trends rather than trying to buck them. Yet, please take ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: Book in a sentence
The Great Gatsby: Nick comes to New York and meets a bunch of awful, rich people, and a mysterious, also rich, but mysteriously-so, stranger called Gatsby, who throws insanely tacky ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: What would your characters do?
Red Rider would scream at her mother for pretending to be dead that time, making her claustrophobic and nychtophobic. They would proceed to argue about the state of Rider's hair, ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Name the Character Above You
Martius, or just Mars, or even Tue. Surname... Lophar? Maybe Hammelly if pushing it. I don't know where does surnames came from. OK, this is a girl, of average height, ...
Jan 4, 2010
