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Re: Delicious Destruction
Can I have a guy? The Byronic punk... perhaps?
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: Rate the Signature Above You [3]
9.3/10. Oooh, spookily Gothic, I dunno why. Maybe I see Gothicness in everything nowadays due to reading Wuthering Heights.
Feb 2, 2010 -
Re: A new home, A new Love ( intro)
Right, so here's my review. I like the premise of the story, how they're kicked out due to the economy, how her family is split apart due to all of ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Keeper of the Stones: Black Dragons (0)
Okay, so I'll give a little reviewette, or something. -Characters Clara: I was getting ready to hate her, I don't know why. Limyaael once said that angsty heroines who are ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Avatar
Yes, but that doesn't mean that thought can't go into it in terms of plot. Avatar featured no twists, really. I mean, my father (a university lecturer in English Lit, ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Dead Assembly
**OK. Anyway, sorry for taking so long too.** Nothing particularly eventful happened the day before I had to go to school. I mean, we moved in, my parents got to ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Black and White
Switchkey He closed his eyes, the breath going in and out of his body slowing. He'd found that, for some inexplicable reason, meditation always made things go faster. He knew ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Adjusting to the Dark- Prologue (1st draft)
All right, I'm reviewing because it was in my Psychedelic Coat, and I must do it sometime. Sorry; haven't looked at it for a while. Anyway, yeah. It felt a ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: A Story Idea. Some feedback would be great.
I think that 2 and 4 are good. 1 is too... yeah, happy ever after. 3 is good, very profound, but you have to admit, it's really bleak. So yeah, ...
Jan 27, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
((Sorry guys, this really isn't working out with me. I'm dropping out; use of my character is OK, it's just, well, I don't really like this one as much as ...
Jan 25, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Zephyra Landing was always difficult, even without Zanette screaming at me from the back of my mind. There was all the precision needed, the fact that if I messed up, ...
Jan 22, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Name: Zanette Brown and her other personality, Zephyra Age: 14 Power/Circus Act: She has wings, light, porous, easily-broken bones. Goes for trapeze artist because she's scared of mobs. Appearance: Sh
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: Circus Outcast (formerly Misfit Circus 2)
Man, I was thinking of doing like, a Misfit Circus 2, where they go to LA and the cops are after them XD. I'll just post Zanette/Zephyra. Though I loved ...
Jan 20, 2010 -
Re: The Fox
Flea "Dan!" That was no scream of anger. That was a scream of fear, the kind that meant pain and death... He turned on his heel, sprinting back to the ...
Jan 15, 2010 -
Re: Dead Assembly
My sister died a year ago. I know that my parents were told that her body wasn’t in the school, that she might have escaped, but to me, she died ...
Jan 14, 2010
