helpless42

We can start right now if you want.

OK, great! here mine Name: Evelyn Age: unknown but looks 16 gender: female Appearance: *She just had chestnut brown wings and their a little smaller species: bird kid history: She ...

Rules: basic rules apply, no god like character etc. you can be a villain if you want. you can only have up to three characters. OK, this is anything you ...

oh pish posh on grammar, its a rough draft right, he can fix that at the end. I personally loved it. its coming along nicely, still waiting to find out ...

OMG! this sounds just like something wrote back in the fifth grade, minus demons and amulet, just orphanage and nightmares. but yours is way better. i like it a lot, ...

good. I like it. kinda reminds me of avatar, and dragon rider, remember to add your own ideas and not just put stuff together. remember the best recipes are the ...

Ok, :smt104 a little wierd, but still good. But whats with the crazy teachers? is this some weird messed up school? Oh never mind, I have to addmit it was ...

brillant! really like it, has that punch or not punch but more like an oof, I dont know the word for it. oh well keep writing!

oh, its so beautiful. Im too young to understand love, but oh, I just love it. It makes me feel all fluttery inside. I think it is very beautiful and ...

really good, I got a little confused at the begging bu tI get it now. I cant wait to read more!

I like it, a lot. especially the start of it. I know your aware of some errors, but hey, this is a rough draph and who am I to critize ...

wow this is great, I havent read the other parts, but I am now. its really good. keep writing!

ha ha!(not a funny laugh, a "I found something I like" laugh) loved it. great beginning, but like king said, a little more description wouldn't hurt. I understand this is ...

I woke in a cave. it took me a moment to figure out where I was, but then I remembered. Quickly I got up seaching for my sword. I found ...

"I'm not afraid of you, wolf." I said, pulling out my sword.I looked deep into her eyes, they burned into my memory, she had let me go. that much I ...