helpless42

I vote that you try soup, all it is heating it in a micrwave.

love is dumb. you look goofy and it always ends badly. it makes your friends creeps and can really mess up your life. who needs it?

Japanese anime music rocks! but I like country and pop too.

buying books is ok sometimes, but only after you have read it at the library and only if your going to read it over and over again.

first person is great because you can show what the character is thinking and tell it from their point of view. plus you can use sarcasm.

a sword can chop a pen in half. so hah!

think about it, free candy!

Wow, you got hit pretty hard with typos huh? I hate it when people do that. I put my stuff out for people to tell me what they think about ...

its really good. Im totally into the whole vampire thing and this is great for your age. you could space it out a little more though. when I looked at ...

Hey, this is really good. I mean like really good. I like it a lot, but it seems a little long winded. Remember that too much of a good this ...

good good, but im a little confused. when you siad dripping with steal, Was it melting or was that supposed to be something else. (it would have to be very ...

wow. thats all I can say is wow. you have it down, the whole death mood. you show me into his mind. The numbness, its just right. you got the ...

Good, I liked it. Yes I agree the plots a little confusing, but I think I know why hes trying to kill him before his time is up. reminds me ...

Gosh, people like to put you down for grammar huh? I get that alot! remember people, this is a rough draft, its not going to be perfect. I like the ...

yeah great! I like the idea of having a whales point of view. I love the ocean and so I think this a a great idea. I agree with scasha ...