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I went to follow the vampite, but I had to find out what a fairy was doing with a were-wolf. I was too curius to not find out. I headed ...

I sniffed, feeling slightly animal, but caught something. It smelled like dog, but also something small, sweet. Jarian (her trainer) Had described something like this, sweet inocent-I thought it was ...

I was walking though the woods, not really going anywhere, just walking. then I felt this tingling at the back of my neck, Somebody was nearby. I climbed the neasest ...

Name: Adrianna (adrian) age: 15 Creature: Elf Rank: Warrior Apperence: Short light brown hair kept in two ponytails on the sides, Pircing green eyes, 5'4. history: Was abandoned when she ...

“Where are we going?” Dori asked easily gliding along. “School.” Jessica’s breath was ragged. Five minutes, she wasn’t going to make it. “What’s school?” Jessica ignored the question

Inside it was empty except for a desk and a bed. On the bed sat a girl. Her hair was blond and long, her skin paler than the moon. She ...

opps forgot to add the rest of the paragraph. here it is. this house was for sale, why keep the doors locked. She pondered this until she came to Dolores’s ...

yes yes I know, terrible grammer, would make your english teacher cry. go ahead and corect it, just a rough draft. yes I also know it ends at a bad ...

real good, but like azila said, kneeds more description. you put a lot of charecters in there to start with, this can be good or bad. if you have too ...

I loved it! I am a girl and if I got a poem like that, it would make me happy. the simplisty of it adds to the depth. fantastic, my ...

thank for all you help guys, I really apprecate it, especially the grammer stuff.

oh yeah I know about the grammer mistakes, I hate that subject. as for the really abrupt ending, my mom made me get off because it was time for dinner ...

The boat speed on across the black water. Jade looked across the horizon for some sign of land. At last she spotted it, small black bump just barley in sight. ...

When the lights started to go on sooner than they normally did, Jade knew that it was time. She grabbed her coat and headed outside. The wind met her and ...

Name: Riana age: 15 Apperence: Has long red hair that reaces her waist, she keeps it in a braid. she is tall but no t too tall, and she is ...