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It seemed meaningful to me, actaully very meaningful. Actually VERY VERY meaningful!! It was great! I loved it.

It sounded kind of awkward because it didn't have a steady ryhming rythum, but I think thats what you wanted. Anyway it was very beutiful and I unterstand what your ...

I really like it, ecspessiclhy (someone please exuse my spelling) The ending. "A torn heart, A dead soul, Scars never to leave, Destroyed, The walking dead, But they won’t see ...

Very beutiful. It flowed very nicely. The subject was a little confusing but I still unterstood it.

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!! BROVO!!!!! The ryhiming was great and it flowed perfectly!!!

I agree with Carsguitars77 I didn't unterstand the point/subject/concept. But I did slightly unterstand the ending. Which was beutiful.

I didn't realize it was a song at first. But then after few reads got it. I actaully like poems/songs about suicide. I don't know why but I do and ...