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  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Lucine ~ Prologue

    Hey AlexCooper, thank you for taking the time to review :) I can understand your points, like with the vocabulary and various other points, I will make sure to revise ...

    Feb 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Lucine ~ Prologue

    Hey 21gmu! Thanks for reviewing :) I understand your criticism and I agree with what you have said, so I will revise the mistakes. Thank you. Yes, I like the ...

    Jan 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: Lucine ~ Prologue

    Hey! Thanks for reviewing :) I understand what you mean about the description, I rushed it rather than thought about it in depth, so I'll revise it and edit it. ...

    Jan 30, 2017


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