heartbeatboy

that depends, is it a real artistic story, something that has to be lond and/or complex for the story to be intact? If so, then...whatever! If not, it depends on ...

Of course, I cut out the pop culture refernces and the giant dragon, but here's my idea, I based off a dream I had: A fourteen-year-old boy named Devin finds ...

very original, I like the idea of a story centered around the gods of the land rather than its inhabitants. Very nice. Reminds me of Ring of Five Dragons, just ...

I guess it could be for show, but I think it could be like chapters in that it segments he work further, to show story progression, and plot development, in ...

I'd write it from what you have backwards. What should happen before what you have? Immediately before that, what happened? then work back from there, just like that.