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Eragon and R.L. Stine books for sure, and I think there are too many narnia/lotr cliche rip-offs to even count. ugh

You continue to say "Talking talking," so-and-so spoke . I think you mean said, or is that just something you did on purpose. It doesn't sound right to me. Another ...

that depends, is it a real artistic story, something that has to be lond and/or complex for the story to be intact? If so, then...whatever! If not, it depends on ...

Of course, I cut out the pop culture refernces and the giant dragon, but here's my idea, I based off a dream I had: A fourteen-year-old boy named Devin finds ...

Pretty good. I also think spacing the dialouge would do you good. It seemed a little theatrical, like the first five minutes of a tv pilot. Not a bad one, ...

very original, I like the idea of a story centered around the gods of the land rather than its inhabitants. Very nice. Reminds me of Ring of Five Dragons, just ...

I guess it could be for show, but I think it could be like chapters in that it segments he work further, to show story progression, and plot development, in ...

I'd write it from what you have backwards. What should happen before what you have? Immediately before that, what happened? then work back from there, just like that.

I'm reading this Present Darkness by Peretti

If it means anything, I'm also a junior linguist. I'm thirteen but I'm at college level linguistically.

I have a strategy for getting published someday, and thought it'd be good to run it by here. I write a book each year, faster if I can, getting longer ...

I'm now to YWS and am completely open to critisism or advice, but that doesn't mean I won't disagree or have a friendly argument, I just won't flame you.