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  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Short Elf story

    Smilykid, simply disregard everything TL G-Wooster said. Totally useless comments. 1- "Been done before." "It's all been done before." The kid is 13 YEARS OLD. He's learning how to write. ...

    Mar 21, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Short Elf story

    Nice work. I agree with Daniella's comments regarding the punctuation. Keep up the creative writing. I also like that quote by Albert Einstein which appears below your writing. I think ...

    Mar 20, 2009


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