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Hi There. I really like the way it rhymes. specially how you've incorporated rhymes into the same line. 'Story, Glory', 'word, hummingbird'. I totally, loved this.. So the first two ...

Hi There. First of all, I think you just related to 75% of the average teenage population, me being the top of the list. I just finished with school, all ...

Hiya.. So what I really absolutely loved about the piece was the complete change of feeling from the beginning to end. The description of the accident was so precise that ...

Hi there. So overall I think you've done a good job. The thought was clear and the flow was almost perfect. I only have two small nitpicks. In the fourth ...

Hi there. I am in love with this.. It is so heartbreaking in way. In a good way. You know it's the kind of piece where you keep hoping that ...

Hi there.. So this was hands-down one of the best romantic poetry I've read in some time. The imagery you created was just beautiful. And the way you've shown the ...

Hi there. Okay, so I have no nitpicks! None at all! I totally love this! I could actually feel what you've written. my grandfather's pretty sick too, so I could ...

Hi There! So this is a really nice poem.. I love the theme and it is especially close to my heart. I'm a law student, and cases of innocent people ...

Hi there. First off, welcome to YWS! You'll love it here. You're gonna meet so many people here who are just like you. This place is addictive. Coming to your ...

Hiya. Okay, so this is actually really good! I think what I loved the most about this whole thing was that it was short, concise and caught my attention from ...

Hi there Gaurav! First of all I want to tell you that you are the 4th Gaurav I've met! And you can start dancing with joy at the fact that ...

Hi There. I'll start of by saying that this was really good and very well written. I do have a few suggestions, so please bear with me. "a hymn to ...

Hi there. First of all I must say this is good. I personally really like it. I think everyone interprets a poem differently. My interpretation was that you were trying ...

Hi There. Let me start off by saying that for a first poem, this is really good. It's fun to read, and thumbs up for that. I had two things ...

Hello There. Well, this is really good. It's powerful and really draws the reader in. It flows really well. I felt that the last stanza had an optimistic tone. Maybe ...