hannahh.

HEYY!!! i got a lot of complaints about un-originality and too much like twilight and not realistic enough. so i wrote a complete make over piece of my original. it ...

OKAY MY AUTHORS NOTES ARE HERE BY IN CAPS JUS FOR FUTURE REFERENCE. THIS IS A TOTAL REMAKE OF MY ORIGINAL STORY. I DONT KNOW WHICH ONE TO EXTEND ON. ...

I do agree with most of you that this resembles Stephanie Meyer's work, but this is just a passage from the middle. This is not the beginning. Both characters starting ...

this is quite good. in general... im not a fan of fanfiction. but this is good. it fits in well. i would critique it. but im so bad at that. ...

this story moves way too fast. plus the italics make it hard to focus on. lol. but good job for the most part.

this story moves way too fast. plus the italics make it hard to focus on. lol. but good job for the most part.