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It's a great concept and no huge grammatical errors. Except in the second and third line it doen't look like there are spaces after the periods (I'm part grammar nazi, ...

Everyday is a battle, Every night a victory, Every breath a bullet, Every step a bomb. The search for peace Becomes a struggle for power. The search goes deeper, But ...

It's a cute little poem, but the middle stanza all rhymes, which is not the same as your first and last stanzas. I understand this poem was written for fun ...

haha.. whole forum has made me laugh today. alright my random moment... in our school lunch line my friend stole my lunch money (a whole $2) so i started punching ...

haha... i spent the last twenty minutes reading through these random facts and i just have to get in on this. Many people tell be that i can sound exactly ...

I wrote this story last year for one of my English class assignments. i intended on expanding it but i have so many project to work on. hope you enjoy. ...

That's really good. I also know my way around photo shop but i could never make something like that. Nice work, i'd like to see more.

alright I'm am going to be brutally honest. this in no was was anything close to the best poem i ever read. it is far to evident that you did ...

It sound like a great idea.... but there are some small things i might change. -1. the mother was murdered by the father for insurance money. interesting idea, but a ...

Alright the Sims 3 was just released in the U.S today, June 2. I, being a hardcore Sims fan, went and purchased the game for fifty dollars. I brought it ...

thank for the help. and Teufelshund, thanks for the advice, but the when I write, for some reason I need the character names, ages, and descriptions beofre i begin.

Alright I am planning a new short story that may or may not develop into a novel. I am currently at a stand still because I cannot decide on one ...

I worte this very quickly, but i think it is something that needs to be said. There’s a million of “ Them ” in the world, but only one you. ...

Don't ever feel rushed to finish, or even start a story. let it form into exactly what you want it to be then start. If your ready to start then ...

nice poem. unique and interesting. It has a rhythm that works well with the lines in the poem. There aren't any grammar mistakes and it is prefect the way it ...