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hahaballoobuh here! I think that this is a very good beginning, for it leaves the reader thinking, "Okay, so obviously, this isn't from the 20th/21st century, but where are they, ...

Hey, it's hahaballoobuh123! i joined recently but haven't gotten the chance to join this forum... I'm currently writing a (quote-unquote) "book" and I'm very excited to be able to share ...

Chapter 1 ~ Moonlit Encounter Somewhere in the darkened night, a light shone out, awakening me from a lethargic stupor. What the crap? I looked around me at the desolated ...

Oh my gosh, I am literally shaking right now. That was amazing! Your writing has amazing voice, imagery, and the metaphor with the thunderstorm put so much in perspective. I ...

I love it! A couple things though: [ “Ooohhhh yyyyeeessss ttthhhheeeerrrreeee iiiisssss,” an eerie wail corrected. ] It's kind of awkward for the word to carry on like that and ...

mmk, so this is my first post :D yay! this is the prologue to this book that im writing... i know its really awkward near the end and i would ...