hAMBERgur

I never really got the whole "critiquing writers" thing because, well, isn't it what the words mean that count, not the grammar? Anyways, your poem moved me! There were a ...

I'm always too late for corrections. This story is really well-written! I feel like I'm this girl, freaking about stupid hair (like most girls do). But, one question. What's a ...

Well, I won't really say anything anyone else hasn't already said.... But yeah, I thought this story was funny and cute. I liked how the narrator was over dramatic about ...

Hello. First off, I just wanted to say that I love this story! I like the way the narrartor interacts with the audience. I love the main character. I see ...

Wow, as the other two said. Too many characters at once! Try intoducing one chacter, have a scene with them, then intoduce the other in another scene. Otherwise, it looks ...

that was good! the only thing i would have to say really is the part that goes "Plenty of fish in some sea" i think you should change "some" to ...