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Chapter 22 Tavrinal and Jataal rose before the sun was up, packed their few possessions and the provisions they had bought, and paid the innkeeper for their rooms before saddling ...

Here we go! ‘Faraas’, the scribe said impatiently. He shouldered his way past Haroun and over to me. He hauled me up and began propelling me forward, but Haroun blocked ...

So... where's the next chapter!

It had only been six quick lashes. Danteel, on his knees and leaning against the wall, couldn’t even remember what they had been for this time. The pain had subsided ...

Mwahahaha! *sings* I got here before Smuuuurf! I got here before Smuuuurf! :D I gripped the ewe firmly between my knees and lifted its upper lip. A mouthful of broken ...

Ah! I didn't even think of that. The problem is, my darling twit, that I wrote this scene ages before I wrote the others, before Danteel's no-screaming policy had been ...

I should be flogged, I truly should, for not posting this sooner. My appologies!!! * * * * * The rapier felt good in his hand, solid and familiar. Even ...

Sorry my first post was so stingy; I hope this makes up for it! An ocean of confused voices and half heard sounds should be “half-heard” I think Then I ...

Found it, cannot WAIT to read it, but Edinburgh stand between me and a real crit. Once I get back from the Scottish north, since my coursework is as good ...

:oops: Um, wow, yeah....thanks Sage and Jig! :oops: :oops: :oops: Both your comments were REALLY helpful, especially as this is about half my grade for this class. Oh, by the ...

whoops! It is supposed to be "mane," thanks, and I was wondering if Jyip was too much. Thankee much, darling! *give biscit*

Yay! All your guys' help really...helped *wince* and I went back and totally re-engineered it. Same basic plot, but I expanded the original first ending, as requested, and I think ...

*scatters chocolates* Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate all your comments on this. Part of the reason for the different endings (and how short they are) is ...

*WAAAAIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSS* (will have more comments when I can stop crying :()

*shrug* All I know is that it's in da rules. I can see how it would get annoying if EVERYONE prefaced stuff; after all, we come to these threads to ...