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w00tw00t! thank's aero! *give a big, chocolate-chip cookie*

Loverly, aero, I like this one much better. It's really nice that we know his name now--and the mental images I got were a lot sharper and more distinct--great job! ...

Thanks everyone!!!! Chapter 5 to come out soon--in the meantime I've tried to go back and change the things you mentioned. A lot of them really, REALLY needed changing ;-) ...

please note: the poem will make practically no sense if you don't know the backstory. sohma house is where Akito...lives. if it can be called living. Akito is........not what I'd ...

yay! the editing of chapter 4 (according to aero's crits) is achomplished. let me know what you think, aero (I left the elephant/fox analogy, it makes me smile every time ...

sorry, Karenna's surprised that she's horrified because the child was a Gypsie, and according to human standards she's not "supposed to care" what happens to Gyspie kids. will change, though, ...

Chapter 4 Headmaster Tavrinal sat bent over a few sheets of parchment, his quill pen scratching as he wrote. The candle set beside him dripped wax onto the oak desktop ...

The bloody speech is not, in fact, over, but I couldn't wait anymore! Myth and Aero, your catches have been integrated (though I left some of the things you mentioned ...

Yeah, Myth is an awesome critiquer, isn't she? :D But I notice you didn't say anything about my critiquing powers/usefulness.....*grumblegrumble* :wink: No worries. Just wanted to pop by and see ...

Hehehe.....Boom rocks. You'll love him, really. He's one of the few charecters that I ever had a dream about, and he's been in my head ever since. So, yeah, Boom ...

Myth and Areo, you guys are wonderful (in an annoying kind of way :D ). Great catches, both of you, and thanks muchmuch. *gives cake* The next couple of days ...

Lol, thanks much Jiggity! I think the "feminine dance of terror" is something only girls might know/understand, so I shall change it. Good catch with Laroo giving up info too ...

w00tw00t!!! awesomeness, Aero, totally loved it! THIS is what you're capable of, right here!!!!! I really, really got into it this time, got a real sense of your charecter and ...

Chapter 3 “Elementals are, as you know, the source and the beginning of magic in our world.” Karenna sat with her head in her hands, listening in bored dismay to ...

Chapter 2 As Karenna got out of the wagon in the main Academe courtyard, she could not help but marvel at the institution’s size. The buildings looked like massive blocks ...