gyrfalcon

*tackles with a hug* Clau! That's MY move! *tackle/hugs HARDER* WELCOME BACK!!!

Very much a good poem, darling! It had the rythm and taste of narrative, but you never got stuck on story-like details, you kept the flow going in a very ...

I'll admit it's difficult to get into a short poem, but I found this one especially hard to "click" with. Perhaps try starting out with something that gives us more ...

This one has actually worked for me, in one form or another: Professor: Where's your literary critisism essay? Me: You see, I was looking over the piece you assigned us ...

Thanks Fand-tastic! EDITED!

*bows* "Hello, m'lady, I've heard ever-so-much about you, shall we dance?" *sweeps her into a waltz before she can protest* ~Tannar "Oh, and Kit, a wencher's someone who 'knows' a ...

"Humans in general." ~Tannar "Myself." ~Danteel "Ooo, metaphysical answer, Danteel, very nice. As for me....wait, my answer is the same!" ~K'ratcha who do you wish you knew less about?

Hello, welcome, and et cetera! :-) Everyone else seems to have done a capitol job of welcoming you already, do I'll just repeat: have fun, PM me with any questions, ...

Thanks so much, Fand! I've been waiting for someone to give me some useful adivce on my poetry. *bows* *hugs*

I enjoyed it - how could I not? - but for some reason I find myself feeling that it promised so much and failed to deliver. I kind of got ...

Well, I saw that you had done something in historical fiction, so of course I jumped right over here to see! It is very long, though, and also about one ...

It wasn't so much the repetition itself that bothered me as the fact that you ended three lines with "sorrow." Also, there was a lot of straight-up description here, maybe ...

"Ooooooo, I knew the 'wencher' thing would get him. *runs out, grabs Daekom, drags him back* Come on, now, you know I didn't mean it. Can we get a drink ...

"Blue, obviously." ~Tannar "Black." ~Danteel "Probably have to be green." ~K'ratcha "Green here, too." ~Kivan "Ooo! Purple for sure!" ~Sharr "I like mullberry." ~Amandra "That's not a color." ~Mitra "

"No. I never get paranoid." ~Tannar "I should say not. I am equally paranoid at all times, which is to say I am constantly on my guard." ~Danteel "No, I ...