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Where is the rest!

Loved it, Kel! :)

Lovery, darling--afraid I can't give you an in-depth critique, but I want more! *starts to chant* Finish story, finish story, finish story...

"Do not get me started on my siblings! First of all, there're about a hundred of them, and of course half of them are only half-sibs because, yep, mom and ...

Your titles are, of course, perfect, darling, and I especially enjoyed the first one. I think the concept of "framing the orb" might have been a bit better served if ...

I really did enjoy it, darling, you managed to make the rhyming sceme work better than a lot of poems I've seen, and the tone of it was deffinately right ...

Very much enjoyed it, darling--it put words to a lot of things that I've felt and been told over the years. You captured the mood, the...sense of it perfectly. Only ...

I "did the punct" as CL is fond of saying, and think it sounds eversomuch better now.

Sorry guys, this one has to go.

8/10, cause you made me smile and blush at the same time (is it from a movie or book?)

But you must ! Even if it doesn't pan out, it'd be tooooo delicious to see Sherlock's face when he realizes.....:D

Oh, jeez, darling you're not alone! I don't like torturing all of my characters....wait......I don't like tortruring most of my characters. But it's not just you, trust me. My problem ...

We Brits don't have a habit of celebrating our past defeats. You should watch "The Great Escape" - spells it all out in there. Potato anyone? :lol: :lol: :lol: Sorry, ...

*deep cleansing breaths* Okay, okay. Well, first, I was of course delighted when I saw there was another one of these gems (seriously, darling, you need to do something with ...

EEEEEKKKKKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (it's a delighted "eek", trust me) How-what-who-jeeba!