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What can I say, I enjoyed it. The use of lower caps was good, methinks, and the line breaks really gave the piece a solid rythm (sp?). Overall, a good ...

Ooo, bird agrees with shireling on the descript of henchmen idea.

OOO! I love Furuba, but I'm not sure what you mean by combining that with a Muse idea--do you mean they become a Greek god when hugged? I'd love to ...

Yay! All WUNderful advice, Nate! As for myself, I've managed to combine both journal and brainstorming into one delicious thing: my commonplace book. I got the name from Snicket's "Unfortunate ...

No corny villians. A tad cheesy, but not unbearable. Then again, I am your biggest fan, you might not want to listen to me. But trust me about the villain ...

Hehe, I really need to stop commenting on your poems, darling, I never say anything constructive!!! In this case, though, I kind of only half-get it (which, for me, isn't ...

Ooo, this is the first time I've ever gotten a threat from a reader. :D Yay! ShadowTwit: you are, as ever, my eagle-eyes. I'm also REALLY glad you liked the ...

Chapter 18 “Allarhana!” The word exploded into CavernLights and Cerreno, who had screamed it, dropped to his knees next to the corpse of Dosh. Kalab had launched himself from his ...

Terrify my heart, Reckless submission sweeping through my soul, Fearlessness chaining me to pain. The art of giving control: A craft too sweet For my logic-bound mind to grasp. Slavery ...

But J. does! Do you mean he should earlier? Wait a minute, does he? *checks* Edit: *gasp!* He doesn't!!! For some reason, I always imagined he did--THANK YOU IMP!!!!!! :smt038

um....darling, you know I love you, but if anyone else gave me a crit that badly spelled/grammar-checked (i.e. "snap"), I wouldn't exactly listen to them. Put some effort into what ...

Haha! Wonderful! I think it's great that I can finally find modern-ish poetry I can follow. Really enjoyed it, darling, the format was a little wierd but maybe that's just ...

Hi again! it dead in here.... Do you all hate me that much! :smt022 Nawww.....I'm just bored. And feeling a bit overwhelmed with two bros on here.

You're fantastic, darling, as are your suggestions. While I like it that people enjoy In Thrall, it's kinda annoying when no one actaully takes the time to find out what's ...

Woho! Princess Bride rocks--you can even use it for writing tutorials! :)