gyrfalcon

Third and last are the best of this set, deffinately. To catch the sun with such high breakers coming in...that was beautiful. Even more cool was the one with the ...

The third was actually my favorite here: I like how the sun looked sort of doubled, or streched out, and having the whole picture sort of framed by the two ...

Well, they've about covered it, but blast it, these are really good. *blushes* Not that I thought you couldn't do well at photography, of course not...just perhaps not that well. ...

*head/desk* Trust me, dalring, I know I introduce too many characters too fast (though don't get me wrong, I appreciate your noticing it). But the truth is, the honest, painful ...

Chapter Two Tanvark had slept badly last night. He was so nervous; this would be his first solo job. Navik probably wouldn’t be happy with him afterwards, but their parents ...

*is a very, very bad bird* Myth, here you have gone and given me a wonderful, useful critique, and it has now taken me *counts* THREE MONTHS to get around ...

Blast, everyone already mentioned the Bartimaeus Trilogy--I was going to say that! Anyway, yeah, as has been said, it can work, but in my opinion, only in the hands of ...

The blue is the best, though I do like the two pics of the same pinkish flower. But the blue is definitely the best (and not just because I like ...

Brilliant, darling, genius. Don't you dare listen to the others (sorry guys) and put in more action--the (almost) pure dialog was perfect!!! *sigh* It's been far too long since I ...

These are great!!! I hope you don't feel offended if one day I make one of these my avatar! :D

And here I come again, all geared up and ready to crit, and lo and behold, I am beaten to it! I shall, however, copy/paste this chapter to my computer ...

Surealy beautiful, with a unique flow that sweeps the reader along at just the right pace, curving and twisting into something lovely. You did a wonderful job here, darling, and ...

Thanks, both of you, I've really been waiting for someone to comment. Crystal, I understand how it could be confusing to you, sorry you didn't enjoy it. AmeliaOliver, I'll deffinately ...

I must say, darling, the title did not exactly draw me in, but the last poem of yours I read was so delicious that I decided to give this one ...

Beautiful, darling. There are very few poems that can creep beneath the ability to make me smile and touch the ability to make me silent--this is one of those. Your ...