gyrfalcon

*blinks* "What's wrong with you guys! Can't you just ACCEPT that what you do is magic of a kind? I mean, for Werenna's sake, I control the elements of wind ...

"Wait, what about Raven?" ~Tannar "And Fal?" ~Danteel "And Rohsair?" ~K'ratcha "Well, they all have powers of one kind or another, even if Danteel's is only to resist K'ratcha's kind." ...

8/10, hauntingly beautiful if depressing, darling

You're a lifesaver, darling!!! You've given me exactly the information I needed on what was going wrong here, and I think I can really make some improvements. Your points about ...

9/10 wooowwwwww

"Oh no. Gyrfalcon's just watched Sense and Sensibility, we're all going to be talking like brits for a week." ~Tannar "And we'll have to put up with Colonel Brandon wandering ...

Thank you very much for the advice, ducks! *sweeps bow* I'm glad so many people seem to like this! I actually did it for a school assignment awhile back.

"Wouldn't it be wonderful if that's all it took for the Lady Bird here to write" *glum* ~Cirio "Hey! She just wrote about a THOUSAND words of a scene for ...

These are great! I've never even heard some of them (which, for me, is rare) so this was really helpful--thanks darling!

Because it got lonely for it's friends, the white blood cells. Why did the ice cream cry?

you have something against conjunctions? I noticed you left them out in several places. Maybe it's just a thing all we Lizes do, maybe it's a style thing, all I ...

hehe...yes, I do have a nice way to kill him, just not now. Oh, and btw, I did that "Not a killing blow" twice on purpose, parallellism, you see. *taps ...

1) Always, always, always have a pen with you. 2) When you think of it, write it down. I mean now. Because you will not remember it later. 3) When ...

*stands in wonder* *sniffs, wipes tear* *stands in more wonder* Amazing, darling. It's really not fair that you can be so awesome at prose, and then churn something like this ...

'allo, darling! *pounces* Welcome to the loverly YWS! Mename's gyrfalcon, so it please you, and I do appologize for the neo-Shakespearean talk, normally not this odd. *shruggs* Anyway, as I ...