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I'm sorry, love, but I see "Todesmaschine" and I think of toads.

Oh no, has Pol seen these lists? He's going to be insuferable when he finds he's on FOUR people's want-to-meet lists. *grumble, grumble* Not that I'm not over-the-moon so many ...

CL you're an absolute wonder! *many hugs* This is hugely useful, I love your format of critting. Do not dare let me rest until I have integrated this!

*standing ovation* Wow, I cannot even count the number of times I've found myself in the middle of your proverbial Sahara...

Yay! I'm afraid I've always been a bit defficient in this area, thanks a million, cadmium, darling!

I have a cocktail of random Celtic songs (including Brian Boru, Mystic's Dream, Skellig, ect.), a lot of John Williams stuff, the Pirates of the Carribean 3 soundtrack, the Harry ...

Read, loved, huggling now. Btw, maybe I'm just thick, but how do we submit to this YWS journal thingie?

A pat on the back: When I came back to find another chapter, after a few days of having not read, I instantly remembered everyone; that almost never happens when ...

Wow, thanks Jack!!! This really helps me out a lot, too, as one of my characters has a familiar who was once a wild fox.

For me, there's a huge difference between editing and rewriting. I generally enjoy editing, until it gets to the "I just can't figure out what's wrong here but I know ...

Ooo, excellent advice, Snoinkus, I'll have to try it! The thing for me is, I can normally ignore the music if it's totally off from what my writing is trying ...

Haha, here we are, part two! (and much better this part is, too, b/c, methinks, ye have more dialogue) First off, question: Um…why are you using only single quotes? Beyond ...

You did say shred, yes? Those were your words, "please shred it for me"? *cringe* I don't hate it, darling, I really don't, in fact I like it a great ...

Okay, is it just me, or is it a little creepy that three 40+ people joined YWS apparantly just to answer this post? Um, guys, this is a YOUNG WRITER'S ...

Chapter Three Kivan noted the first drops of rain without alarm, merely puling up the hood of her cloak and maneuvering her pack so that it hung within the waterproof ...