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Re: Certain Twilights: A Mix for YWS
AMAZING!!!!
Sep 19, 2007 -
Re: Rewrite of Born of the Stars
You're fantastic!!! *hugs* Like I said, I can't integrate it immediately as I would like to, but in answer to your question about the " alien lover " look--it's not ...
Sep 19, 2007 -
Re: Another Milestone Reached For The Young Writers Society
Woho!!! *waves YWS pompoms*
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: The Turquoise Scarab #4 *PUT ON HOLD FOR MEGA COMPOSTING*
Here we go! Every now and then, Sharifah would come outside and boil more water, then take it back inside again. Not a bad sentence, but it’s a bit overweight. ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Girl, 3, Abandoned in Train Station - Melbourne
Y'know, some people just should not be parents.
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
*sigh* "Uh-oh, our writer's listening to Lullabye for a Stormy Night...DEPRESSED!" ~Tannar "Why should she be depressed, it's a lovely song! Plus, isn't she leaving soon?" ~Danteel *shrug* "I know. ...
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: Rewrite of Born of the Stars
The four being...Sharr Kavan, Mitra, Lativichia and...whoever the other one was. Cool. LOL! :D The four are Sharr, Kivan, Mitra, and Latrichia, darling--thanks for reading!
Sep 18, 2007 -
Re: What's that? That's who? Yup! That's thing two!!
Hello, TT!!! I'm gyrfalcon, or bird, or gyr, or even gry if you're spelling challenged. ;) Loved the fact that you have an original title for your welcome thread, so ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: Changing Raincoats
Really beautiful darling. The part that most impressed me was the voice--like many people, I sort of "hear" things in my head while I read them, and this was a ...
Sep 17, 2007 -
Re: What's Up, Fellow Dudes and Dudettes of Writing? :D
Wow, someone who can spell. *blink, blink* Welcome to the wonderful world of YWSness, darling, and just to make it official: *POUNCE*!!! Please shoot me a PM if you require ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Why Did You Register?
I joined, like many people, because a friend reccomended it. But I didn't really become active until I discovered all the cool stuff these guys have mentioned: the friendliness, the ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Five Ways To Get Critiques
Totally agree with Sam here--I always do my best to thank all my editors, especially those who consistenly critique certain stories. Giving out internet cookies and lots of hugs seems ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Character dialogue
"Keer, you have WINGS!!!" ~Tannar "Narvik, you're cussing?" ~K'ratcha "Shafter, I'm sensing a bit of strain here..." ~Danteel "Indeed." ~all "Do let gyr know if there's anything she can do." ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: In Thrall
You're such a sweetheart!!! *hugs* And, quite frankly, you're generally right about the logic, and I shall fix such things as I can, but one thing you need to remember, ...
Sep 16, 2007 -
Re: Patriotism
Yeah, I'm pretty sure it's not a genuine Cease quote. Also, what whoever-he-is seems to be talking about is what Kaz has so kindly defined as nationalism. I'll agree it ...
Sep 15, 2007
