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:smt021 Me terrible bird! I'm sooooo sorry I haven't gotten around to critting this yet, Rome just ate up my weekend and all my strength with it! I SHALL give ...

8/10, cause I totally agree ;) btw, mine's part of a quote from the Tempest, and I do take it as a compliment!

:( you don't have one!

Yay! All your guys' help really...helped *wince* and I went back and totally re-engineered it. Same basic plot, but I expanded the original first ending, as requested, and I think ...

Yeah, that's my thing. The age difference doesn't mean so much when they're BOTH over-the-hill, as it were. *pops chamagne bottle* So, cheers to them!

I do find it interesting that so many cliches seem to be a matter of dates. As in who wrote it first . I once watched a very, very, VERY ...

*scatters chocolates* Thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate all your comments on this. Part of the reason for the different endings (and how short they are) is ...

Orphan I bundled my too-large, second-hand coat around myself as I paused on the path back into the orphanage. The main bulk of the dormitories loomed to my right, and ...

*WAAAAIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSSSSS* (will have more comments when I can stop crying :()

Lol, I was thinking that myself... 10/10, suits you as nothing else could!

*shrug* All I know is that it's in da rules. I can see how it would get annoying if EVERYONE prefaced stuff; after all, we come to these threads to ...

Lol, it means introducing your work with words that are outside your story, i.e. this is my first work, I've worked on it X long, ect.

Okay, really don't take this the wrong way, but I was quite surprised to find that a thirteen-year-old could write with the level of sophistication you've shown. To be honest, ...

7/10, for general astheticness

6/10 I'm a little ???