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Lol, Lethro, remember that she's British, so the spelling of some words is going to be different from what Americans are used to (personally, I prefer British spelling, but there ...

"Karenna. Pure and simple. Taken in total." ~Tannar "You sap. I'd have to say...Lataar's wings." ~Danteel "Tannar's eyes." ~Karenna "My right eye." ~Cirio what color do you wear most often? ...

"Um...sort of, but not in a really definite sense." ~Tannar "Yes." ~Danteel "I couldn't really say; I just don't know." ~K'ratcha "Oh yes." ~Karenna "Yes, but we aren't speaking." ~Cirio ...

would depend entirely on who I was to kiss and where I was to kiss them." ~Tannar "Certainly, if I could then promptly run them through." ~Danteel "I have to ...

What really gets me (as a Christian) is that they pretend to do this because of "God's Will." *vomits* That just makes. me. sick. I'll admit I don't believe that ...

At last! Something in this section I can really sink my teeth into! Can't speak as to when I'll be done, but would you prefer a posted or PMed critique?

Two main things, one little, one a little more over-arching. 1) Don't start with "Tonight" if you're going to write this scene in past tense. Start with "That night" or ...

:shock: Uh-oh. Hooked another one. *sigh* Well, welcome to the mad-house, darling, your adoration would be even more welcome if you happened to know an agent who would like to ...

Yeah, scam-avoidance was one of the big reasons I went with a source as reputable as Writer's Market and didn't go searching on the internet. I'm getting a deffinate agent-first ...

Wow! This has been really helpful guys, and I think I'm getting a pretty solid consensus. ;) Thanks for all your help; keep it coming!

Hello YWS! I have recently begun seriously looking at having my fantasy novel, Gypsie Eyes , published. My first step, of course, was to get my hands on material that ...

"Certainly, but with reluctance." ~Danteel "Yuck. I don't really know; I hope not." ~K'ratcha "Maybe. It depends on who." ~Cirio " Never ." ~Tannar what is your biggest secret? (not ...

Chapter 23 Avarn. His head jerked up, the word wrenching him from the half-sleep he had fallen into before his warm hearth. His blind eyes searched for something that wasn’t ...

- Rope : a generally useful thing that always comes in handy - Kitchen Knife : ditto - Life raft : I like not freezing to death [i]and[i] having the ...

Yep, I loved the Hobb books myself and always thought that was a good device she used. Here's an idea: a friend of mine wrote a book (never went anywhere, ...