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Aha! *giggles because she apparently made the ending as ambiguous as she wanted* Does Penny drown and her mother go crazy? Does Penny go to live with the mermaid and ...

Overall a very intriguing and attention-grabbing intro to a story, darling. The way you've formatted it (first like a news report and then like some kind of official journal) further ...

Maybe this will be the time; maybe she’ll play with me this time, I think. Good sentence, but I think you need to change the punctuation: comma instead of a ...

Not a bad poem at all, darling, you do some clever things with words and images, but my personal preference is for a poem that has a little more of ...

Proper critique: “Tell me tomorrow,” Mr Holmes had said. So I did. When I woke up, Doctor Watson was drawing back the curtains. Holmes had gone. Not sure what’s bugging ...

The first time Penny came running into the house, dripping wet and babbling about a mermaid in the lake, her mother was understandably skeptical. Penny had a powerful imagination, even ...

6/10

10/10 0.0 ooo! fun to watch!

1) 7/10 (just tickles my fancy) 2) 10/10 (You know it!)

6/10 I just don't get it...

7/10 *blinkblink*

By ‘every major religion’ I assume you mean Christianity, Judaism and Islam? Considering that this condemnation exists in the Old Testament, which is a part of the holy book/s of ...

8/10 Nice colors and lighting

10/10 Amen.