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1. Yes, I could tell it was a she right away and she seemed pretty darn realistic. If it were me, I might play up the "I can't believe this ...

Moved to Other Fiction.

Beautiful, darling. This is my first introduction to your characters (though of course I've heard of Regan) and you do them beautifully. The description of Gin was especially realistic and ...

You know, I consider myself both unfortunate and stupid to no have had a greater exposure to your writing, but if this is to be my introduction it's quite a ...

"Ooo, shiny, where!" ~Tannar *shrug* "More or less." ~Danteel "Never been a fan, personally." ~K'ratcha what is your worst flaw and how are you going to improve upon it?

Um, that's "obscene wealth," aeodemir; and Galatea, I apologize for jumping on you.

What a brilliantly rounded man Lewis must have been: I would have loved to meet him. *smug* It just totally crashed on me, about a month ago, that I'll get ...

My biggest critique would be about the child's voice. While the style is great, this really doesn't sound like a child talking. I'd agree with Mr. Fledgling here, this was ...

Hello, my name is K'ratcha, and I can make you see things that 1) aren't really there, 2) you really don't want to see, and 3) will probably give you ...

Oh, and you know what else offends God? Pretending you understand His/Her moral code. ^_~ First off, by making this statement you seem to be saying that you do understand ...

First off, would you mind going through and putting spaces between your paragraphs? Makes it a whole lot easier to read. Second, you might want to scan through and check ...

5/10

Ender's Game rocks, but Ender's Shadow is just. totally. amazing. I *heart* Bean!

Thanks, warrior. I'm not exactly what you'd call a Bush supporter, but I think it's sick the way this country has turned on him. In case everyone's forgetting, our Senate ...

Lol, I'm sure he's made his mistakes in his time, darling.