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  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "Only if you call battle an art." ~Latrichia, Born of the Stars what kind of footwear do you prefer? boots, sandals, ect.

    Sep 12, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "You know, it's strange, I can speak at least three other languages, but I never learned to read and write Basic properly." ~Kivan, Born of the Stars "History." ~Danteel "What ...

    Sep 12, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    Sorry, forgot: Who would you kill if you could kill just one person without getting caught/in trouble for it?

    Sep 11, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "Master." ~Danteel "Alien-lover." ~Kivan "Princess." ~Latrichia

    Sep 11, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "I think my sword does the job of a lucky charm and then some. *mutters* Lucky charm indeed......" ~Latrichia, Born of the Stars of whom are you most afraid? why?

    Sep 9, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Wordmaker

    just a note, guys: WE are the wordmakers

    Sep 9, 2006
  • Other Poetry Re: Wordmaker

    Wordmaker What are we called? Wordmakers. What are we born of and what do we craft? Words. What do they call us? The Inkweavers, The Invisible Mouths, The Faceless Voices ...

    Sep 8, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Shadow Dance

    hello! very nicely dark poem (oxymoron, I know), I quite enjoyed it. there were just a few lines I got kinda hung up on, the same basic thing each line: ...

    Sep 8, 2006
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game

    "Why would I be afraid of the only thing that makes me feel at home?" ~Danteel, Born of the Stars if you had to kiss someone, who would it be?

    Sep 7, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son and Slave of Kings

    Wow, thanks very much, Mesh and Snoik! I'm kinda not used to getting comments on poetry, so doing my best here. So glad you guys liked it (Mesh: at least ...

    Sep 7, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Things Not Seen

    don't get rid of the "black and blue" line it's perfect, right there the poem is so powerful, it's not necessarily supposed to be perfectly smooth and flowing. a little ...

    Sep 7, 2006
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Son and Slave of Kings

    A poem written for a charecter named K'ratcha. Let me know what you think. Son and Slave of Kings No rhyme can contain the tale I tell, No verse will ...

    Sep 7, 2006
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Where Lies the Ocean

    I think it's fantastic! As Skoink says, the words literally DANCE! You really make the charecters and the settings come to life for me. I never really liked historical fiction ...

    Sep 6, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Worlds

    the aliterations were also very nice.

    Sep 5, 2006
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Worlds

    I really enjoyed it. The use of imagry (like, "words become land") really spoke to the way I feel, or the way writing makes me feel. I'm glad it didn't ...

    Sep 5, 2006


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