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Prologue The little gang of kids was not, as any casual observer would think, watching the storyteller. Instead their eyes were focused on the thin, frail boy who sat nearest ...

'ello dahling! I'm the resident crazy bird here, feel free to call me Gyr! I'm also an automatic Brit fan, so any crits I give you will be biased :-) ...

"Nothing. Not any more." ~Danteel "Like, really break down weeping? I don't know, badly played music perhaps?" ~Tannar what makes you laugh?

"Have to be Avarn. Don't make me spell out why." ~Tannar "Probably...Lark Erabon. I haven't seen him in what, twenty years? But still." ~Danteel "Laroo." ~Menee "Menee." ~Laroo if you ...

Coolness! I like the concepts here, but try to keep up a consistant rhythm. Aside from that, very coolio.

Okay, please don't hurt me: you asked for it!!! And remember, I crit because I care. Really! I wouldn't have spent so much time on it if I thought it ...

"It'd have to be Stars in Your Eyes . *snicker* Ask Latrichia why." ~Alak "ANYTHING but Stars in Your Eyes . Jeez, you sing it once and suddenly it's 'your ...

"I've known Avarn all my life--litterally. All six years of it." ~Tannar "About three years now, excepting Komar, my husband. I've known him for upwards of twenty years." ~Kivan why ...

For Slick Jimmy: There you see her Sitting there across The way She don't got a lot to say But there's something About her And you don't know why But ...

"Cold." ~Tannar "It was all right. I got a few presents, which I didn't expect, and everyone was so nice to me all day." ~Kivan what makes you blush?

"I have the kind of metabolism that most girls would kill for, so no, I don't exersize. I'm naturally about 6' 4" and thin as a hat-stand." ~Mitra "Well, yes. ...

I loved it. It gave me a special, tingly feeling inside, like the kind you get sitting in front of a gentle fire on a winter night, with the snow ...

Thanks fireweed! *gives a cookie*

"I'm a six year old, near-immortal magical being bound to an eighteen-year-old blind magician, and I'm in love with a mortal. You tell me." ~Tannar "Count the scars on my ...

Loverly, dahling, a nice O. Henry-like twist there at the end. :-) I do have a...few comments. Remember, I crit because I care! on such an occasion should be "in ...