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Myth and Areo, you guys are wonderful (in an annoying kind of way :D ). Great catches, both of you, and thanks muchmuch. *gives cake* The next couple of days ...

But not by much, Cass! 'ello, Razor! I'm Gyr, resident crazy-bird. If you ever need/want an insanely long crit (ask turtlechow and aeorman about my crits), just let me know! ...

I'm sorry, Myth, I only got to the first chapter so far, so please forgive me. Very intriguing I must say, only a few suggestions. He was the first spiritual ...

"Well, I did find this ring in a dark goblin cave once....just kidding. Have to be, well--Karenna tells me I'm always scratching at the bronze bands around my wrists. But ...

"My rapier." ~Danteel "The cloak Tannar gave me." ~Karenna "My cane. I never want to forget...all the things it means." ~Kivan what would you do if a real, genuine, knight-in-shining ...

Lol, thanks much Jiggity! I think the "feminine dance of terror" is something only girls might know/understand, so I shall change it. Good catch with Laroo giving up info too ...

another Fruits Basket rut. Sorry, but not looking for really serious/specific crits here, just needed to get this out of my system. Full of dark rooms Full of shadows, Pain, ...

Hey, Pros! Sorry it's taken me so long to get here, and I'm afraid it shall be longer still before I can do a full crit. Just read the first ...

w00tw00t!!! awesomeness, Aero, totally loved it! THIS is what you're capable of, right here!!!!! I really, really got into it this time, got a real sense of your charecter and ...

Muchmuchmuchmuchmuch better! You did an excellent job of getting rid of your -ing phrases soft spot, a very good job. Now, onto that comma's soft spot: Rising bitterly, white flashed ...

Dahling, I am here to save you from the depths of despair! You. Are. Fantastic. Amazing-Wonderful-Incredible-Marvelous-Glorious; Chiar of Wind and Darkness is one of THE best books (yes, I said ...

Chapter 3 “Elementals are, as you know, the source and the beginning of magic in our world.” Karenna sat with her head in her hands, listening in bored dismay to ...

Well, to answer your question in regards to Gypsie Eyes: #1. my main charecter is NOT 1) well-known, 2) generally liked/accepted, 3) social/acceptably talented, 4) anyone's pawn--at this point, anyway

Dahling! Yay, I'm so excited that you're on YWS finally! Can't wait to get some CotS on here, so happy. Happy bird. :D Everyone, aero, Snoink, DD, this loverly Shafter ...

I'd prefer if you didn't, but if there's absoloutley no way around, then yes. No f-word at all though, please.