gyrfalcon

Yay, customers! :D Sock, I started on your story, but once I saw all the awesome critiques you'd already gotten, I was wondering if you still needed my services? Just ...

Well, you asked for a line-by-line, and in the interests of thoroughness that's rather what I'm doing. What that means is it's going to take a few posts to get ...

Banned for finding Reepicheep as amusing as I do. *huggles Head Mouse, gets skewered*

Banned for (apparently) living in a Holmes story, as can be seen by your country.

Hey there, thanks everyone for the quick response! Thunder-Dude, your crit looks to be very helpful, just a couple things I feel I should clear up (and my bad for ...

My darling Sam! *grovels* I realize, your most exalted ladyship, that you have many more requests before mine, many of them more worth your valuable, your precious and priceless and ...

Mr. Thunder Dude! :D *is first customer* If you wouldn't mind taking a peek at my newly-reposted prologue and first chapter for Gypsie Eyes , the fantasy story I'm trying ...

Darling! *huggles* Well, you're just about the coolest person on site now, arent' you? ;) As such, I was wondering if you'd be so good as to take a look ...

Prologue The children were not, as any casual observer would think, watching the storyteller. She sat on a stump in the field west of the town, with the eleven of ...

Icaruss, the reason I don't like Romance is not because of fluff--it's because of the sex and such. Even so, as you're my "first customer," I did take a look, ...

Banned for living where I most want to go!

Well, my darlings, my incredibly wonderful readers and fans and critiquers--we find ourselves in an interesting place. Gypsie Eyes has grown a great deal since I started posting it, and ...

just that I always find myself thinking about you when things over here get rough. The rhythm of it feels wrong—try “when things get rough over here,” comes out more ...

Hello all! Well, here I am, gyrfalcon, willing to trade my amazing editorial services for just a scrap of cake. ;) To be honest, I’m a picky editor, and I ...

Banned for being able to write such things as Scavenger!