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Chapter 12 Pagrin stood on the battlements of the stone wall that surrounded his home, watching the colorful trail of Gypsies wind through the gates and into his main courtyard. ...

Ahhhhhhhhhh, makes much more sense now, thank you darling. I shall do what I can to make everything more clear. Yes, when he's angry, Danteel's black eyes start to show ...

"Avarn." ~Tannar "My mother. But, of course, that's impossible." ~Karenna "Mattira. Stars, I miss her so much." ~Danteel what makes you feel helpless?

*bows* thanks again, my lady. I shall integrate this into the main draft, along with Myth's comments, and will try to have everything finished by tonight

>no answer< ~Tannar "Afraid." ~Karenna what amount of money would it take for you to betray your family?

When Danteel woke up, he was lying on his side, and there was something dabbing at the back of his head. For a moment he couldn’t remember, and then the ...

"Why? I could crush your tiny little mortal head in with one well-placed hailstone, why should I answer your tiny little mortal questions?" ~Tannar (sorry folks, he's in a bad ...

*hugs* Thanks, darling!

What Claudette said, read LOTS of poetry. This just seemed kind of pointless, and way too violent. I mean, violence is okay when used in moderation and with a point. ...

(note: this is a very rough first draft; any help that could be given would be much appreciated) “The Happiest Place on Earth” is a phrase often received with the ...

She saw it all, and died.

Myth: *bows, bows bows* Again, imensely helpful, darling!!! Not sure what else to say besides that--thank you so much! I will do my best to work these in over the ...

Hello all! Just an update to those who may not know (aka, those I haven't pestered to death about it...yet); I've begun posting the first sections of a fiction piece ...

probably a fantasy, sounds like it'd have dark overtones/undertones and a moderate amount of sourcery or other metaphysical stuff. I might give it a glance, if the cover looked intriguing ...

*bows* Myth, darling, you have the sharpest eyes I know--thank you for deinging to turn them on me! Your catches have been saved to a very safe place, and shall ...