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Chapter Five “Miss Morn.” Karenna stopped and turned around, holding her hands behind her to hide the napkin-wrapped leftovers she had pinched from lunch. Headmaster Tavrinal approached her across

Banned for having a depressing signature. :(

Here I am! All will be well. ;) It was ever so within the bounds of the massive walls that enclosed them. That enclosed what? – as normal as his ...

Sweat poured off his head as he ran, mouth open, panting from the physical exhaustion that was beginning to settle in . 1. Just off his head? 2. One generally ...

:Edited to include awesome critiques: Seriously, guys, what am I going to do with you? I'd really appreciate your opinion on how I did at slipping "Gypsie danger hints" into ...

Mwahaha! *is first critiquer of new chapter* and through my ulster. Um…what’s an ulster? Resek’myr’s quarters / from Resek’myr’s door / Resek’myr’s hut After awhile, I think “the”

While you may not be a poet, you have every right to be proud of this poem. I’m not much of a poetry-editor, but I loved it. Your use of ...

Chapter Four Headmaster Tavrinal bent over a few sheets of parchment, his pen scratching as he wrote. The candle beside him dripped wax onto the oak desktop as the flame ...

Ah! *is swamped by absolutely awesome critiques!* I loooove you guys! *uber hugs* :D You have no idea how encouraging you've all been, I can't believe how many amazing editors ...

See! Look at all the other in-depth critiques you're getting, what do you need me for? ;) Seriously, though, I'm putting you on my list of things to at least ...

I realize that I seemed confused by everything, but then again I am a picky editor, and when I'm in editor mode I sometimes forget to be a good reader ...

"Dirt." ~Tannar "Professor Lockskrip." ~Karenna "I rarely suffer from boredom, in fact. Anger is a much more powerful emotion, and though I may be bored at the same time that ...

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Awesome! Does this mean we could be trading in .yws stock?

"If they're of equal intensity--stomach ache, definitely. A headache is a lot easier to ignore, but a stomachache is located right smack in the middle of your body." ~Tannar "I ...