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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The truth about celebrity.

    Hello...lol. Sorry, jus thought it would be fun to be like... Hellloooo. But i didnt think you'd appreciate that. :? First I'd like to say, Not all poems have to ...

    Apr 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The unspoken thoughts of suffering

    I think it's an amazing poem. I think the punctuation and all look good now, but i never read the poem without them either. I also think that you've hit ...

    Apr 10, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Ok to Shoot

    Thats a really nice poem and I agree with the colons. It would be right to add them in. `There is a feel to the poem which is hard to ...

    Apr 10, 2008


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price