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Re: The truth about celebrity.
Hello...lol. Sorry, jus thought it would be fun to be like... Hellloooo. But i didnt think you'd appreciate that. :? First I'd like to say, Not all poems have to ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: The unspoken thoughts of suffering
I think it's an amazing poem. I think the punctuation and all look good now, but i never read the poem without them either. I also think that you've hit ...
Apr 10, 2008 -
Re: Ok to Shoot
Thats a really nice poem and I agree with the colons. It would be right to add them in. `There is a feel to the poem which is hard to ...
Apr 10, 2008