gretchen

this is good, however the last line doesn't fit in with the others. It is a straight out contradiction while the others are not. I'm not sure if this is ...

this is good, but i'm not really sure how far apart is safe and sound, also a refrence to the internet.

Disclaimer: I tried to write this in the style that L.M Montgomery does, but unfortunataly I think I have made a total mess of it. This is unfinished so please ...

This is really great. You covered alot of important things in this and I like that it isn't dominated by fear or worship like all cristian prayers. It focuses on ...

I really liked this, but I'm not so sure about the last part. I don't think that the police would have killed him, let alone without for sure knowing that ...

I don't really know what I'm doing but I think I have to press reply to review it? Anyway, It was awesome, I bet you could pull that off as ...

Disclaimer: It took me ages to work up the courage to post something, but anyways here it is. Please review, even if you don't finish it. because then I will ...